Saturday, October 23, 2010

You are a Dream Come True....!!!!!


You came into my Life like morning's first ray...
and made wonderful moments like like lovely toys of clay,
You told me what is Love You told me What is Care...
How somebody is present In All your prayers,
I started finding music in hushing sound of water...
My imagination expanded and griefs went shorter,
My life became a rainbow with thousand more colours ...
I started feeling lonely in the company of others,
I felt like a bird flying high in Sky..
Sometimes like a timid rabbit turning red coz of shy,
Smile became my permanent Attire..
The Level of Happiness went higher and higher,
Sometimes I felt gloomy,went  Dull & down...
You made me laugh acting like a clown,

"When the night was dark and moon also slept...
When I was in fear and my sunken eyes wept,
You held my hand when I was in Blue..
OH !! My beloved Darling you are a dream come true"
Posted by Shikha Singh Gaur at 7:55 PM

20 comments:

  1. Ankit ChoukseyOctober 23, 2010 at 8:08 PM

    superbbbbbbb yaar.........u really a gud poet........

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  2. supritpOctober 23, 2010 at 9:45 PM

    A very nice poem.....keep up the good work...

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  3. UnknownOctober 24, 2010 at 10:04 AM

    Wooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!! Very arranged n full of beauty. Specially the last stanza

    "When the night was dark and moon also slept...
    When I was in fear and my sunken eyes wept,
    You held my hand when I was in Blue..
    OH !! My beloved Darling you are a dream come true"... hats off

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  4. Prateek modiOctober 24, 2010 at 10:09 AM

    gud 1

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  5. shr_123October 24, 2010 at 11:10 AM

    nice...!!!

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  6. Monika SharmaOctober 24, 2010 at 1:11 PM

    And when you left me I became half,
    I forget, how to smile and how can i laugh...
    may god help you to achieve the things you want,
    so that on my love I can flaunt...

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  7. Shikha Singh GaurOctober 24, 2010 at 3:10 PM

    @monica...awesome lady simply awesome...looking forward for more beautiful lines....

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  8. aniketOctober 24, 2010 at 4:10 PM

    @shikha: awesome yarrrrrrrrrrr .... luved it .... :)

    @monica: nyc 1 !!!!

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    1. Shikha Singh GaurJune 16, 2016 at 9:52 PM

      I have been looking at my own blog almost after 2-3 years !

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  9. adarshOctober 24, 2010 at 7:33 PM

    hmmmmmmm....
    gud gud...
    ye to dedicate kar sakte hai kisi ko..
    hehehe...
    :D

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  10. AbhinavOctober 24, 2010 at 7:47 PM

    that was nice..

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  11. Shikha Singh GaurOctober 24, 2010 at 10:33 PM

    Thank you people....

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  12. sweta sharmaOctober 25, 2010 at 11:13 AM

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  13. UnknownOctober 25, 2010 at 5:14 PM

    superb...........i mean cant hav words 2 apric8
    i can understand every bit of it...........it is larger than life........fantabulous

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  14. Shikha Singh GaurOctober 25, 2010 at 5:30 PM

    @amit sir ---Thankyou so much..i knew you would like it...

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  15. sweta sharmaOctober 25, 2010 at 6:49 PM

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  16. RajOctober 27, 2010 at 11:12 PM

    This one is the best!! By the way who is this gentleman ;)

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  17. Dr. Rajesh TrivediOctober 30, 2010 at 12:28 AM

    u pushed me deep into the sizzling winter of yore.
    so sweet Shikha
    indeed great

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  18. meenalNovember 9, 2010 at 11:10 PM

    nice

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  19. UnknownNovember 13, 2010 at 1:16 PM

    gr88 goin'...

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